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Re: Sweet lullaby
I have to say I like it. and niteowl it is poetry. the reason I am giving it 3 stars is that it leaves the reader wondering "what?" you might ...
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: for brad (unfinished)
this was such a beautiful poem. I really don't have much to say but..."Wow!" keep up the fantastic work. CL
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: attempt to appear older (+13)
I like it. To me the choppiness adds to the raw (emotion) feel of the piece. keep it up. CL
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: Walk with me (title soon to change)
thank you muchly dears. Yes I am new. I am think about putting the speaker's name in parenthesis in front of the paragraph, so you know whose thinking, but I'm ...
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: Slaying the Dreamer --Over 13 for language--
thanks alot. Wow...I hadn't realized how many typos I'd missed. I will be working on those pronto. Thanks again. cheers CL
Apr 16, 2005 -
Re: The Boy and The Bridge
with 'it' I was refering to life was for him and how it never changed. that sort of thing. CL 8)
Apr 15, 2005